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And thus concludes the round: The Bloodhammer forged from Golem masks has an apparent voice and power to connect the the caves, the structure of the caverns has been drastically devastated, Thunder is knocked out and falling down to a questionable fate... and this all reminds me of Mario Twins, somehow...

Thank you to all for letting me use your OCs, especially :iconseveruseprentine: for allowing me to have a thinking opponent with ties to the outside worl. I have not decided if Thunder killed the good doctor Foilus... either way he is just going to be in need of some serious medical attention.

I did hint that Thunder had another side behind the laughing and smiling and sex jokes, I never said it was a nice side tho. Let's see how far he takes this mean streak in the next round now that SARS has officially accepted his all out challenge for War.

Wish me luck!

:iconocbz: round 4 of Blookdspring


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Um... wouldn't all the collapsing caverns above them crush everyone in the desert below, thus killing all the competitors with 2 rounds to go? Or at the very least, send the toxic bog pouring down on them?

Why does he need only one mask from each golem type, if the "power" is distributed to many golems across the levels? And what happens to Thunder when he fuses the remaining masks and the rest of the cave goes to hell, filling the whole place with gritty toxic bog lava?

I don't mean to be a nit-picky prick. I'm just sort of a stickler for those sorts of things. :shrug:

Things are definitely happening here, but... I've seen you do better with the storytelling. Zombies were done in Highway if I recall... the annihilation of Haradam isn't much of a surprise (I knew from the get-go that someone would go and wipe out the whole town, even though such large-scale destruction borders on melodrama). Folius sort of stands there preaching while everything happens around him... the jumps from humor to drama are a little more "jumpy" than usual....

Still, you laid your cards out with your take on the Bloodspring story and Thunder's character development. Some of the scenes looked pretty badass. All in all you didn't do badly, it's just that as a whole you've done better. I'd say you and Sev are close to evenly matched here.